My hands shoot forward through the water with a fast splash. I can see the wall just a mere 5 meters away. This is it, the final last strokes that will determine my fate for a race. As my hands touch the wall, I look up at the scoreboard where I can be satisfied or not. This is what it feels like to be a swimmer.
I’ve been swimming for 5 years and there are many things that I love about it that I don’t feel like I get from other sports. One, it’s social. My friends and I think of practice as not only practice, but as a social hangout. It’s what makes swimming more than just sets and technique. I also love the practice part (sometimes). Every time I swim, I know that practice makes perfect, so every meter I swim makes me better. I also love swim meets. You have to wake up at five in the morning when no one is awake, and drive (sometimes for more than an hour) to get to warm-ups, which start at seven. Even though it’s ridding you of your sleep, it’s worth it. I always love swim meets because I get to sit and hang out with my friends, but also race people from other teams (and sometimes my own friends) to get good times. The goal for swimming is to get the fastest time possible. My friends and I always try to beat each other for friendly competition and we always cheer for each other, which makes swimming even better because you know your friends are supporting you even when you are swimming on your own.
To me, swimming is one of the most difficult sports. You can do a stroke a thousand times, and there’s always something to improve. It could be head position, timing, arm technique, muscle technique, there are endless things. Despite these things, swimming is a very relaxing sport and is extremely fun whether you do a stroke right or wrong. Swimming is also not like a sport you play. When you hear people say, “I play soccer,” or “I play football” or “I play basketball” you can’t say that for swimming. “I play swimming?” It doesn’t make any sense. You do swimming. It’s just something that you do. I also get lots of exercise from it. I may not be running on a track or doing wind sprints, but the repetition is very effective and I remember a time when my coach made us do 32 75’s alternating between butterfly, backstroke, breaststroke, and freestyle. After practice, my friend had figured we had swan 2400 yards which is about a mile and a half in about forty five minutes. Even though we all just wanted to stop, we didn’t, because long grueling sets teach endurance and swimming requires endurance.
In my mind, you need three things to become a good swimmer. 1. You need to be able to practice. Practice makes us all better. 2. You need to break down everything so that you can master little things at a time. My coach always breaks down different elements of strokes so that you can get 100% out of every part of the stroke that you are doing, whether it be with you arms or your legs.
Even though swimming is my favorite thing to do and I will never get tired of it, there are times when I want to throw down my goggles and call it a day. Those long sets where you repeat the same sequence of 100’s, 50’s and 200’s just tire you out. Also when my coach finds us talking while she is and makes us do a 500 free is a drag, but discipline is part of swimming. There are the exciting parts too though, when you win your heat and win one of those lollipops or drop a ton of time on a event are probably the two most exciting for me. When you are waiting for the ribbons that you won and you get them in your hands and they have your name on them with your time, that is one of the most satisfying moments a swimmer can have.
And after four years, I finally won that blue ribbon that had 1st place on it.
Your description of your "best/worst" swim meet was excellent. Finding something you have a passion for in life is so important.
ReplyDeleteHi Kittycat52,
ReplyDeleteI like how you say water is your second home. I used to swim when I was 6 years old and found it very fun. What is the hardest part of swimming competitively?
-Advay K.
Dear Kittycat52,
ReplyDeleteIt's really amazing how you talk about commitment to swimming. All hard work really pays off when you get a prize. How long have you been swimming? Did you ever think about quitting swimming?
Lauren Mei
Dear Kittycat52,
ReplyDeleteI like how you made the text match the theme of your paper. What made you want to swim?
-Kenya
Hi Defne,
ReplyDeleteI love your post because it shows how you feel when swimming, and the way you described swimming. I also loved that you made your text blue. When did you start swimming?
Keep on swimming!
Chiara
Hi Defne,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your post because you talked about your passion. I was wondering if you play another sport?
Sincerely,
Ramya
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ReplyDeleteHi Dafne,
ReplyDeleteI love how passionate you are about swimming. I like how you added the pictures and the video as well! I was wondering if you are going to keep swimming for the rest of your life?
nice job!
-Emma
Hi Kittycat52,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you really talked about how swimming was really your passion, and how it is like your second home to be in the water. I was wondering, do you think you will want to have a career in swimming?
-Jasper
TO Kittycat52,
ReplyDeleteThat is so cool that swimming is like your second home. I love all the dedication and time you spend to in swimming. Additionally, the beginning was a great eye catcher! Great detailed writing!
Do you have a favorite stroke?
-Lion