Saturday, February 1, 2014

Brother

 
Brothers

I have 3 brothers on is older and is named Gus the two younger ones are named Keola, and Liko. Gus is really annoying. He is in the high school and always get to stay up later then me. Keola and Liko are my favorite they are really nice and look up to me. They like to play what I like and are really good at football. One of my favorite sports. I am now going to tell you a small story that happened only a few days ago. I was sick and in bed. I had been reading in my bed for the past few days and was getting really bored. Keola being the best brother in the world really wanted me to get better and he went all out in trying. First, he drew me a picture of a alien thingy that and it was really good. The picture had the word get better soon. That night he brought up diner a hamburger that they got from my favorite restaurant the hub.Then the next day, he brought up breakfast mt favorite, cinnamon crunch. I was getting the best treatment of my life. That is why my two little brothers are the best in the world.
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  1. Anonymous19 February, 2014 19:34

    Greetings Eliot!
    Loved your post! I enjoyed how you mentioned the upsides and downsides of having multiple brothers. I think it is good that you mentioned both sides, because relationships with siblings are usually love/hate relationships. One thing I would ask you is how does Gus get annoying? Is it mainly little things or is it sometimes just flat out mean stuff that he does to you?
    Your good guy
    Alex

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  2. Anonymous20 February, 2014 18:05

    Hi Eliot!
    I really like your post! I love the two sided argument you make. I have a brother, and he fits into a lot of the things that you mention. The little things that he does annoy me so much. One question: have you found that you get some things earlier than your brother did?

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  3. Anonymous23 February, 2014 09:43

    Hey Eliot!
    I really liked your post. It explains a lot of what siblings have to go through with their brothers. I would wonder if what does Gus do to be annoying (I noticed someone else had asked as well)?
    Great post!

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    1. Anonymous11 March, 2014 10:19

      Thank you my brother usually annoys me by talking in a very annoying voice that kinda makes me want to punch him(I don't but I want to). Thank for reading my post.

      Eliot

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  4. Anonymous26 February, 2014 14:34

    Hi Eliot,
    I think this post is really great! It explains how sometimes siblings can be a pain (mostly older) and how sometimes they show how they really care about you. Do you think that sometimes you might have been like Gus towards your little brothers? Does Gus treat your little brothers better than he does to you? I thought this was really interesting- I have an older brother and it was cool to see the different perspectives
    -Gemma

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    1. Anonymous14 March, 2014 08:17

      Gemma
      I think that I am a little more open then Gus because I am 2 year younger then him and my little brothers are 4 years younger then me so as you might know it is alot easier to be nice to younger kids. Thank you for the comment.

      Eliot

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  5. Anonymous10 March, 2014 13:46

    Hi Eliot,
    I think it's really sweet that your brothers would do that for you, my sisters would never try and make me feel better when I'm sick, they just think I'm boring and leave me alone. I don't think that I could ever choose a favorite between my two sisters, they are equally nice to me and I think they equally love me. They do team up on me when we are playing games usually though, and my older sister is in college now so my sisters can't team up on me since she is on the other side of the country. What does your older brother do to annoy you? Why does he annoy you? I really enjoyed hearing another persons experiences and thoughts about having siblings.
    Thanks!
    ~Bailey

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  6. Anonymous14 March, 2014 08:23

    Hi Eliot,
    I really like how your post revolves around you. I like how you included your three brothers names. If you could have a sister in addition or instead of one of your brothers, would you?

    Great post,
    Grace

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  7. Anonymous14 March, 2014 08:56

    Hi Eliot,
    Nice post. I like how you described all of your siblings. Do you have a favorite sibling? Do you get in fights with them? Me and my brother fight a lot. Cool post.
    Cordially,
    -KAT

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  8. Anonymous14 March, 2014 09:57

    Hi Eliot
    Great post! I really liked how you described all your brothers not just one. and did you get better from you're sickness soon?
    Harrison

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  9. Anonymous14 March, 2017 16:36

    To Eliot,
    Great post! I love how you described all of you siblings! That's so nice of Kaola to do such nice things to you! DO you ever wish you had a sister?
    Great writing!

    -Lion

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