For my blog post I will be writing about the declaration of rights of man. This was written by a man named Marie Joseph Paul Yves Roch Gilbert (Zhill-bear) du Motier, Marquis de Lafayette. The declaration of rights of man is not to be confused with the declaration of independents, they are very similar because the rights of man was based off the declaration of independents. 
The writer Lafayette went to join george washington's army when he was 19. After a while he became very close friends with george and they became almost father and son. While in the States he grew very fond of the declaration of independents and decided to make his own with the help of his friend Jefferson. They worked long evenings secretly to make the Independence of Rights of Man.
When it was finished Lafayette first called it The “First European Declaration of the Rights of Man and Citizens,” On July 7th, 1787, Lafayette proposed his "Declaration of the Rights of Man," and it got approved on August 26th to be the “Declaration of Rights of Man and Citizens."
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Declaration_of_the_Rights_of_Man_and_of_the_Citizen
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20100113201158AAarXF8
http://www.thirdworldtraveler.com/Human%20Rights%20Documents/French_RightsofMan.html
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Declaration_of_the_Rights_of_Man_and_of_the_Citizen
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20100113201158AAarXF8
http://www.thirdworldtraveler.com/Human%20Rights%20Documents/French_RightsofMan.html
Wilson, great choice for your topic! I though it was great how you showed the relationship between the Declaration of Independence and the Declaration of the Rights of Man. You included some fantastic factual information about Lafayette as well. In the future, try for more detail on the main ideas. Great job with this post!
ReplyDeleteWilson I love this topic. I was glad you told me that it wasn't the declaration of independence because i would have thought it was it was. I thought it was cool that he was close friends with Washington. I think that next time you could add more imformation about the response of europe and what lafayette wrote. good post Rowan :0
ReplyDeleteWilson what a cool unique topic! When i first read it I didn't believe you and I actually went and looked it up! I think you had some great information i just wish you had a little more of it. But the part about Washington is really interesting.
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Wilson I loved how you talked about the writer going into the army an became friends with Washington. I felt that this is a very good writing and you explain the information very well and I can see you know a lot about this topic. Maybe next time a little more content would be better but overall this is great!\
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Thanks guys, Next time I have one of these assignment Ill be sure to look more into it and include more to the post its self
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Hi Wilson,
ReplyDeleteI really like your post and how you mentioned not to get confused with the declaration of independents. And I really like how you added pictures. Maybe next time you can add a little bit more on how the Declaration of Man and Citizen affected people back in the day. Nice job!
-Alon
Hello Wilson,
ReplyDeleteI appreciated that in your post you said how Lafayette and George Washington had worked together, which made this post much more relatable. I also like that you said that it was modeled after our declaration of independence. I think that your post, however, could have benefited from a little bit more information, like the contents of the Declaration of Rights of Man and Citizen, or maybe even who approved it.
-Ben
HEY WILSON -_-
ReplyDeleteover all this piece had pretty good information. I think this piece could have been longer however to really portray what the declaration of independence is about. You also could have included more of ¥our opinions about it to make it more personal and meaningful. Good job sir
over all this piece had pretty good information. I think this piece could have been longer however to really portray what the declaration of independence is about. You also could have included more of ¥our opinions about it to make it more personal and meaningful. Good job sir
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Wilson,
ReplyDeleteYour post was very visually appealing, and I liked how you put photos throughout the post. I liked how you showed the relationships between George Washington and Lafayette. Maybe next time could you add some more details in your next post? Your post as a whole is very good.
Liam
Wilson,
ReplyDeleteI like all of your photos, and how you explained the relationship between the Declaration of Rights of Man and the Declaration of Independence. I wish you had more information on what exactly the Declaration of Rights of Man said, and you also might want to work on capitalization. Thank you for this post.
Piper
Wilson-
ReplyDeleteGreat Job,
I like all of the awesome photos in your blog. I like how you explained the relationship between the declaration of rights of and and the declaration of independence. I also enjoyed the facts about lafayette. I recommend to add more detail on some of your main points.
-Ethan David Stahl
Also, how did Lafayette get to be so close to the president?
DeleteWilson,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on the post. I like the first picture that you posted, and it's visually appealing. I like how you said that the Declaration of Man and Citizen were based off of the Declaration of Independence. It was a good post, but I think that you could add a bit more detail about this subject. In brief, this post was really good!
Great job!
Nathaniel
Wilson,
ReplyDeleteI thought your post was great. I did see some capitalization, grammar, and word choice errors. It was a bit short, you could have given a bit more detail about the people. The pictures were great illustrations. Overall, great.
Zoe
good job Wilson, I think that you should have included more details and fixed the grammar issues but I really liked your topics, pictures, and I think it was an interesting blog. I think if you fixed a few things this would be an even better blog but overall it was a very strong blog.
ReplyDeleteWilson,
ReplyDeleteI thought that your blog post was very good! I noticed that you had some odd capitalization errors, and sentence structure, but I thought that your facts were very strong! I really liked your pictures too!
Gracie
Prendergast,
ReplyDeleteNice blog! I really liked all your information. I also enjoyed your stylistic text and pictures:) It could have been made better if you just fixed some grammar, and capitalization errors. Overall good job!
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Wilson,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you chose a topic that most people would not think of. You had good information. Why did you choose this topic for your post? You had good facts, and photos (although I wish you could have un-stretched the photo). I agree with others that if you read it over one more time, it would have been smother. What do you think about the topic?
-Isabel
WILSON,
ReplyDeleteI THOUGHT IT WAS COOL HOW YOU COMPARED LOTS OF STUFF. YOU HAD LOTS OF GOOD MAIN IDEAS, BUT YOU SHOULD HAVE GONE INTO MORE DETAIL ABOUT THEM. YOU ALSO HAD SOME WORD ERRORS. BUT I LIKE IT BECAUSE YOU HAVE A VERY USIQUE TOPIC. GOOD JOB!
CAROLYN
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Wilson,
ReplyDeleteI like how you talked about about the relationship between Lafayette and Gorge I thought it was cool how they became so close, like father and man. What exactly did the Declaration Of Rights Of Man and Citizen state?
Thanks-Miriam
Hi Wilson,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your post! I taught me quite a bit about the Declaration of Rights of Man. It was really interesting and cool how you talked about the relationship between Lafayette and George. Like Miriam asked, what exactly did it do? Other than that really cool post!
Tara
Wilson,
ReplyDeleteI really like you blog post! It taught me a lot about Declaration of the rights of man. I thought it was really interestion how you talked about the relationship between Lafayette and George, but I was wondering what did it do exactly? Overall really good post!
Caitlin
It has very good details and descriptions. I also like how you really like the pictures, they are visually pleasing and help move the writing along. Overall, great job!
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ReplyDeleteI liked how you talked about the writer of the Rights of man. I think you could have done more though, but the pictures were great!
Good Job,
Olivia
Dear Wilson my Man,
ReplyDeleteThe writer Lafayette was so young when he begun only 19. Independence of Rights of Man you explained as basically a European declaration of independents.By the way you picture of Lafayette is a little wide
Yours Truly.
Isaac a.k.a the kid a.k.a the baller